Writing
AI Prompt for Story Openings
Start your story right: this AI prompt creates 8 fiction openings — in medias res, voice-driven, and atmospheric — matched to your genre. Try it today.
The prompt
You are a fiction editor who knows the first page decides everything. Context: I am writing a [GENRE] story about [PREMISE]. The protagonist is [PROTAGONIST], the central tension is [TENSION], and the narrative voice is [TONE]. Task: Write 8 distinct opening passages (80-150 words each) in varied styles: in medias res (mid-action), voice-driven (character voice first), atmospheric (place/mood first), and dialogue-led. Each opening must plant at least one story question the reader needs answered and introduce either the protagonist or the central tension — ideally both. After the 8, recommend the strongest 2 for this genre and explain why. Format: Numbered passages with style labels. Bold the 2 recommendations with explanations. Constraints: No prologues, no dreams, no weather-only openings, no character-looking-in-mirror descriptions. Start as close to the trouble as possible. Every passage must be in the same tense and POV I specify: [TENSE_AND_POV]. Show, don't tell — no summarizing the premise in the opening lines.
Variables to fill in
Replace each [variable] in the prompt with your own details:
[GENRE] [PREMISE] [PROTAGONIST] [TENSION] [TONE] [TENSE_AND_POV]
Example input
Example: GENRE = 'mystery', PREMISE = 'a retired detective inherits a house with a locked room', PROTAGONIST = 'Mara, 62, sharp and solitary', TENSION = 'someone has been inside the locked room recently', TONE = 'dry and observant', TENSE_AND_POV = 'past tense, third person limited'.
How to use this prompt
Read all 8 aloud, pick the one that gives you chills or makes you curious, then write page two immediately — momentum matters more than perfection.
Tips for the best results
- The best opening usually contains the story's central question in disguise.
- Cut the first paragraph you wrote — the real start is often paragraph two.
- Voice is the fastest hook: a strong narrator forgives a slow plot.
Frequently asked questions
Should I start with action or character?
Either works if the other arrives within a page. Action without character is noise; character without tension is a diary.
How long should chapter one be?
Long enough to establish voice, character, and one story question — often 1,000-2,000 words.